Title: Meritropolis
Series: Meritropolis, #1
Author: Joel Ohman
Genres: Dystopia, Young Adult
Genres: Dystopia, Young Adult
Release Date: September 8th 2014
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In Meritropolis everyone is assigned a numerical Score that decides their worth to society and whether they live or die. After a young boy is killed because of a low Score, his brother plots to take down the System.
The year is AE3, 3 years after the Event. Within the walls of Meritropolis, 50,000 inhabitants live in fear, ruled by the brutal System that assigns each citizen a merit score that dictates whether they live or die. Those with the highest scores thrive, while those with the lowest are subject to the most unforgiving punishment–to be thrust outside the city gates, thrown to the terrifying hybrid creatures that exist beyond.
But for one High Score, conforming to the System just isn’t an option. Seventeen-year-old Charley has a brother to avenge. And nothing–not even a totalitarian military or dangerous science–is going to stop him.
Where humankind has pushed nature and morals to the extreme, Charley is amongst the chosen few tasked with exploring the boundaries, forcing him to look deep into his very being to discern right from wrong. But as he and his friends learn more about the frightening forces that threaten destruction both without and within the gates, Meritropolis reveals complexities they couldn’t possibly have bargained for…
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EXCERPT
“Easier
Said Than Outrun”
Charley
crouched, motionless, willing himself not to blink. A bead of sweat bubbled
across his eyebrow and clung to his eyelash: a warm and salty droplet hanging
like a swollen piece of fruit, overripe and ready to fall. He stared straight
ahead, eyes wide open; to move now would be disastrous.
The
thing stopped, ears twitching. Charley willed himself not to make a sound, but
was suddenly aware of the faint scent of his own sweat; he wondered whether the
creature could smell it, too. He had been following it for half of the
afternoon. By this point, the thing should have had ample opportunity to scent
him, given Charley’s quite rudimentary tracking prowess, but it hadn’t yet.
Each time Charley drew close enough to chance a shot with his bow—and he knew
he would only have just one shot—the thing capered off, leading Charley even
deeper into the brush.
Charley
found it maddening how fast its four legs could move; the bushy forelegs of
pillowy grey-white fur made it seem as immobile, docile, and non-threatening as
a sheep. But, as Grigor had instructed earlier, to underestimate a llamabill
was to invite disaster.
Charley
reached over his head, slowly, and withdrew an arrow from his sheath.
The
profile of the llamabill shifted slightly, revealing great big haunches of what
Charley hoped would be today’s dinner, as well as the severe-looking face of a shoebill
bird. Its body, with the exception of the incongruent webbed feet and feathery
wings, was almost entirely reminiscent of a llama: big, wooly, and slightly
ridiculous. The head, however, was no laughing matter. The wide shoe-shaped
bill could decapitate a fully-grown man with one well-placed chomp. A standard shoebill
stork is not a bird to be trifled with, at three-feet tall and a weight of ten
pounds, let alone when it’s six-feet tall and a weight of 400 pounds with the
body of an agile llama.
Charley
notched the arrow and pulled back slowly.
He
hated to do it, really he did. He didn’t enjoy the killing, but the truth of
the matter was quite simple: they needed food, badly.
Charley
steeled his resolve and dipped his head slightly downwards to his right
shoulder while closing his left eye. He sighted in on the creature, aiming for
the spot where its long wooly neck met its substantially muscled left shoulder.
He reconsidered, tipping his bead slightly higher to avoid the feathery wing
that jutted incongruently from the llamabill’s great side.
The
muscles in Charley’s forearms stood out like corded bands. He held the bow
drawn back all the way without wavering. He inhaled through his nose, and then
expelled the air slowly through pursed lips, attempting to quiet his beating
heart. He would release the arrow upon a full exhale, and in between
heartbeats, just as Grigor had trained him.
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“Easier
Said Than Outrun”
Charley
crouched, motionless, willing himself not to blink. A bead of sweat bubbled
across his eyebrow and clung to his eyelash: a warm and salty droplet hanging
like a swollen piece of fruit, overripe and ready to fall. He stared straight
ahead, eyes wide open; to move now would be disastrous.
The
thing stopped, ears twitching. Charley willed himself not to make a sound, but
was suddenly aware of the faint scent of his own sweat; he wondered whether the
creature could smell it, too. He had been following it for half of the
afternoon. By this point, the thing should have had ample opportunity to scent
him, given Charley’s quite rudimentary tracking prowess, but it hadn’t yet.
Each time Charley drew close enough to chance a shot with his bow—and he knew
he would only have just one shot—the thing capered off, leading Charley even
deeper into the brush.
Charley
found it maddening how fast its four legs could move; the bushy forelegs of
pillowy grey-white fur made it seem as immobile, docile, and non-threatening as
a sheep. But, as Grigor had instructed earlier, to underestimate a llamabill
was to invite disaster.
Charley
reached over his head, slowly, and withdrew an arrow from his sheath.
The
profile of the llamabill shifted slightly, revealing great big haunches of what
Charley hoped would be today’s dinner, as well as the severe-looking face of a shoebill
bird. Its body, with the exception of the incongruent webbed feet and feathery
wings, was almost entirely reminiscent of a llama: big, wooly, and slightly
ridiculous. The head, however, was no laughing matter. The wide shoe-shaped
bill could decapitate a fully-grown man with one well-placed chomp. A standard shoebill
stork is not a bird to be trifled with, at three-feet tall and a weight of ten
pounds, let alone when it’s six-feet tall and a weight of 400 pounds with the
body of an agile llama.
Charley
notched the arrow and pulled back slowly.
He
hated to do it, really he did. He didn’t enjoy the killing, but the truth of
the matter was quite simple: they needed food, badly.
Charley
steeled his resolve and dipped his head slightly downwards to his right
shoulder while closing his left eye. He sighted in on the creature, aiming for
the spot where its long wooly neck met its substantially muscled left shoulder.
He reconsidered, tipping his bead slightly higher to avoid the feathery wing
that jutted incongruently from the llamabill’s great side.
The
muscles in Charley’s forearms stood out like corded bands. He held the bow
drawn back all the way without wavering. He inhaled through his nose, and then
expelled the air slowly through pursed lips, attempting to quiet his beating
heart. He would release the arrow upon a full exhale, and in between
heartbeats, just as Grigor had trained him.
It
was as good of a shot as he would ever get. Charley didn’t really have to do anything, now. He just needed to
relax the three fingers of his string hand, and the llamabill, still standing
motionless, would be dead, motionless forever.
But
he paused.
A
glimmer of uncertainty, a pang of conscience—and for what? he wondered—it was just an animal.
The
llamabill turned to look directly at him, its prehistoric eyes glinting sharply
as they focused in on Charley.
A
cold shiver crept up Charley’s spine. He had waited too long, and he knew it.
The droplet of sweat plummeted from his eyelash, and Charley released the
arrow. It went wild left, and the creature went wild right—directly at Charley.
The
llamabill opened its enormous bill and screamed a challenge. For a moment, it
looked like an anachronism to even more savage times, a winged dinosaur on the
rampage.
Charley
did the normal human thing first, and then the normal trained hunter thing
second. He froze. Then he ran.
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Joel Ohman is the author of the Meritropolis series --"The Hunger Games meets The Village with a young Jack Reacher as a protagonist". He lives in Tampa, FL with his wife Angela and their three kids. His writing companion is Caesar, a slightly overweight Bull Mastiff who loves to eat the tops off of strawberries.
Learn more about Joel: JoelOhman.com
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Q&A WITH
JOEL OHMAN
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Q&A WITH
JOEL OHMAN
Other than an author, who are you Joel
Ohman?
My name is Joel Ohman.
I am 33 years old, married to my best friend, Angela, and have 3 kids, ages 5,
almost 3, and 1. My writing companion is my 130lb Bull Mastiff, Caesar (who's
asleep on the job most of the time, to be honest). I am a Christian who likes
to talk about the good news of Jesus Christ. I
do volunteer work with the Fellowship of Christian Athletes and also with my
church in Tampa. I am a serial entrepreneur, having
founded a number of different startups in the web space. I am currently the
President & CEO of 360 Quote LLC and Real Time Health Quotes LLC, and we own a lot of different web
properties, one of the most popular ones being our workout website/iOS
App/Android App for Exercise.com. You can learn more about me at JoelOhman.com.
What books and authors, past or present,
have inspired you to write?
I read a LOT,
so there are many different things that have shaped my writing over the years,
but I wouldn't say there was any particular book, or books, that I was
consciously looking to for inspiration while writing Meritropolis and Meritorium.
For the craft of storytelling, I have learned a lot from John Truby and his
book, The Anatomy of Story. I can
also see different threads of influence in almost everything I have read over
the years that contribute toward making
the Meritropolis series what it is—the strong protagonist of Lee Child’s
Jack Reacher series, the
philosophical bent of C.S. Lewis’ fiction, the dystopian setting of Hugh
Howey’s WOOL series, and many more.
What
are you currently reading, or what was the last thing you read other than your
work?
I am constantly in the middle of about
15-20 different books. I read for an hour or two every day,
and I try to read a wide variety of genres and authors, both fiction and
non-fiction. You can check out what I am currently reading and follow
me on GoodReads here!
Do you listen to music while you write,
and if so what kinds of music and which artists do you enjoy?
I almost always listen to music while I
write. Usually it’s a playlist of the same song or
group of songs over and over again,
because it allows me to kind of zone in on what I am doing. Here is a link to
the Spotify playlist of music that specifically inspired the Meritropolis series (each of these songs
were among the songs I would listen to on repeat while writing): spoti.fi/1qDgfy9
In the Meritropolis series how were the animal combinations decided upon?
For example, I know you chose to write about a bion (bull-lion), as well as
many other freaks of nature. So what I
want to know is how did you decided
which animals to meld together and why?
I have a big list of animal combinations
that I came up with before I began writing the book, and I tried to work in as
many as I could. Sometimes the only criteria was that I liked the way the name
sounded. There are over fifteen new animal combinations introduced in Meritorium as well as a couple of big
reveals toward the end that many readers might not see coming…
Who illustrated the animal combinations
that are featured before each chapter?
Rachel Crafton is a friend of mine who
is a very talented artist. She did each of the 17 different animal combination
illustrations (one for each of the 17 chapters in Meritropolis) as well as 14 brand new animal combination
illustrations for the 14 chapters in Meritorium:
Chapter
1 - Horoceros (Horse-Black Rhinoceros)
Chapter
2 - Llamabill (Llama-Shoebill)
Chapter
3 - Medusa Tree
Chapter
4 - Venus Mantrap
Chapter
5 - Durkey (Deer-Turkey)
Chapter
6 - Snurtle (Snake-Turtle)
Chapter
7 - Zippo (Zebra-Hippo)
Chapter
8 - Marmosal (Marmoset-Jackal)
Chapter
9 - Hedgedog (Hedgehog-Wild Dingo Dog)
Chapter
10 - Narse (Narwhal-Horse)
Chapter
11 - Sworse (Swift-Horse)
Chapter
12 - Wolverator (Wolverine-Alligator)
Chapter
13 - Boadicon (Bat-Toad-Scorpion)
Chapter 14 - Vulcodile
(Vulture-Crocodile)
My favorites are some of the ones that
were directly engineered by man to recreate mythical creatures like the
unicorn, Pegasus, and even a dragon.
Who or what
was your inspiration to write about post-apocalyptic, dystopian, sci-fi?
I've read a lot in this genre, so I would say it’s
a mix of a lot of different things. I really just wanted to explore this
question of, "What gives a person worth?" Is it their usefulness to
society? Is it because someone loves them? Is it because of how they look? Is
it because of their health or ability? As a Christian, I believe that all people have worth, because
they are made in the image of God. I wanted to explore some different
takes on this question. I think that the post-apocalyptic/dystopian/sci-fi genre was the best vehicle to
tackle some of those deep philosophical questions in a fun and interesting way.
While book #1 was all about this idea of
what gives a person worth—and is really the overarching theme
of the series—in Meritorium I really wanted to explore what makes a person different
than an animal. Is it because we are (hopefully) smarter, more cunning, more
powerful? What if that weren’t the case—could
you say that an animal is just as important as a person, or even more so? Why
or why not?
I also wanted to delve into mankind’s
relationship to animals: why do we love some animals, like dogs, and yet eat
other animals, like pigs? How do we “rank” the importance of one animal in
relation to another? How should we be responsible stewards of the animals
around us? Is it possible to love animals and care for them while also eating
them? And no, I am not a vegetarian—in
case you were wondering—but I think that the Biblical
Theology of Creation is uniquely suited to answer some of these tough questions
that we all wrestle with, at one time or another, and when you can explore some
of these big, weighty philosophical questions against the backdrop of battles
and gladiators and creatures with eyes that glint gold in the pitch black night
then it can be a lot of fun too.
What projects are you currently working
on—both in your writing and otherwise?
The next writing project is book #3 for
the Meritropolis series. Other than
that, I own a number of different businesses, so we always have new and
interesting projects in various stages of development. One fun project is our
workout website/iOS App/Android App Exercise.com.
Can we expect to read more about
Charley, Sven, Grigor, and the rest of your wonderful characters?
Yes!
Are your characters inspired by
people you know in real life, or are they purely works of fiction?
Purely works of fiction. At least that
is what I tell everyone… :)
Why the title Meritorium?
I wanted a short one word title that was
a clever—or at least semi-clever—play on two different words and that
was similar to Meritropolis. I like "Meritropolis"
because it combines "Merit" and "Metropolis," two words
that are great for describing a city where each resident's worth is measured by
a score given to them and I like Meritorium
because it continues this idea of “Merit” with “Colosseum” / “Auditorium”,
words that are perfectly suited for describing a city where gladiatorial games
of life or death combat are waged between High Scores and Low Scores, man and
beast.
Can you tells us about your characters
and who/what inspired them?
I am a big believer in John Truby’s
approach to building a “character web”, because this deepens the relationships
between characters and helps to make
each of the characters more complex. Absent building a good character web, it
can be all too easy to fall into the not-very-true-to-real-life
good-person/bad-person false dichotomy where your protagonist devolves into
this I-can-do-no-wrong character and your antagonist is just pure evil. I was
very much aiming to show the imperfections and brokenness in each of the
characters. My thinking as a Christian influences this to some degree, given
that the Bible teaches that we are all essentially the same; we are all sinners—only God is perfect.
What was the easiest part about writing Meritorium? The hardest?
This was my second book, so I would say
that the entire process was much easier than it was for the first book. I have
great editors who were able to offer constructive criticism, point me in the
right direction, and really speed things up
Who designed the book cover? Why this
design?
Nik Keevil designed the cover. He did a
fantastic job, and has designed covers for the new Lord of the Rings box set,
Bernard Cornwell, Diana Gabaldon, and many other outstanding authors. It was a
great privilege to have him working on this project with me.
In what formats can potential buyers get
your book?
Kindle eBook, paperback, and audiobook
on Amazon
What are your views on marketing your
book through social media such as Twitter or Facebook?
I believe that social media can be an
effective marketing technique if done the right way. The key is that social
media is primarily about building relationships and about delivering something
of value. We all know those Facebook friends who incessantly clog up our newsfeeds
with pleas to join their health and wellness
MLM—don’t be that kind of author! That
being said, I do think that Facebook, Twitter, GoodReads, etc. can be a great
way to meet other readers and authors and discuss fun and interesting things.
Hopefully that will lead to more exposure and more book sales, but coming
across as too salesy or pushy is something that I definitely
aim to avoid.
What about a book trailer? Do
you have one or do you plan on having one made for Meritropolis?
No, I don't have plans to do a book
trailer at this point.
What are your ambitions for your writing
career?
My focus now is on marketing the Meritropolis series and continuing to
write book #3!
What all have you written so far?
Meritorium is my second book so the only other book out is book #1, Meritropolis!
What is the
most surprising thing you learned while writing?
One of the most important things I
learned is maybe not all that surprising, but
definitely important—the value of an editor. I worked with
3 different editors while writing the Meritropolis
series. Each of them provided extremely valuable feedback and advice that
was instrumental at various stages of the book writing process. The book that
is available for purchase now is a much better book than it would have been
without the expertise of my editorial team.
Are you working on anything new?
My next project is book #3 in the Meritropolis series.
Do you have a preference for how you get
your writing done (typewriter, longhand, computer, dictation, etc.)?
I love my MacBook Pro with Retina
display!! That’s the only thing I write on (often with my feet kicked up)…
Do you plot your books? Or, do you just sit down and write what
comes to you?
I sketch out a very rough outline, and
then I just start writing. Things often deviate, sometimes wildly, from the
outline, and I think that usually ends up being a good thing. I do however try
to follow a little bit of John Truby's method from his book, The Anatomy of Story.
Any strange habits for when you write?
Nothing too strange. I always sit in a
chair with my feet up, one pillow on each side of me to rest each elbow on, and
one pillow on my lap to rest my laptop.
What are your thoughts on getting bad
reviews?
Everyone has different tastes in what
they like to read, so I don't let bad reviews bother me too much. No matter
what your favorite book is, you can almost be guaranteed that it will have many
bad reviews on Amazon from people who just didn't get out of it what you did—that's fine. I do try to stay objective and see
if there might be something I can learn from the criticism to become a better
writer, if not, then I just move on and don't worry about it.
Are there any books that have inspired
your own writing?
I read A LOT
so there are many different things that have shaped my writing over the years,
but I wouldn't say there was any particular book, or books, that I was
consciously looking to for inspiration while writing the Meritropolis series. Looking back though I can definitely see
different threads of influence in almost everything I have read over the years
that contribute toward making Meritropolis what it is: the strong protagonist of Lee Child’s Jack Reacher series, the philosophical
bent of C.S. Lewis’ fiction, the dystopian setting of Hugh Howey’s WOOL series, and many more.
Why do you write? Is it for fun, or
because you have something you need to say in your writing?
Some writers are loath to say their
writing has a message, because maybe they think doing so
diminishes their art (not true, in my opinion),
but I think that everyone has a message in their writing, even if they aren't
as consciously focused on it—and
that's a good thing. My message is in the epigraph of Meritropolis: "Because everyone matters - Psalm 139"
Do you prefer eBooks or
traditional paperback/hardback?
I never thought I would say this, but I
now totally prefer eBooks over paperback/hardback. I definitely prefer to read
on my iPad Air using the Kindle app. I love that I can carry my entire library
on my iPad, I can hold the iPad with one hand (so I can eat while I read!), and
I don’t have to add any more huge storage bins
to my garage that are full of books!
Are there any authors that have emerged
in the last three years that have caught your interest?
Hugh Howey is an author that I really
like that has caught my attention lately. I would highly recommend his WOOL series!
Are the names of your characters
important? Or do you just choose some that you like and think will fit?
I am not very Dickensian in my
character-naming. Usually it just entails
choosing a name that I think will fit because of the way it sounds. Two mistakes I think some authors make
is either A) choosing names that are too hard
to pronounce/too unusual/too obscure or weird, and
B) selecting character names that all sound quite similar to one another. Either way, it confuses the reader,
which is never a good thing.
Do you have a favorite genre that you
like to read?
I read pretty much everything! Fiction,
non-fiction, you name it! I am of the opinion that, as an author, I can learn something from almost
every kind of writing. Sometimes, it most definitely is a matter of learning what not to do—but,
on the whole, I love to read a wide variety of writing styles, genres, etc.
How do you feel about eBook piracy?
I'm not too worried about it.
Any advice for aspiring authors?
Take the first step! Just do a little at
a time. If
you decide writing is important to you then make time for it, be consistent,
and read a lot.
Do you have any books that you would recommend
to aspiring authors?
Here are some books that I highly
recommend for all authors to check out:
Wordsmithy
- Douglas Wilson
Bird by Bird
- Anne Lamott
On Writing
- Stephen King
The Anatomy of
Story - John Truby
The Fire in
Fiction - Donald Maas
How long did it take you to write Meritropolis and Meritorium?
It took me about a year and a half to
write Meritropolis, almost two years,
really, and then less than a year to write Meritorium.
I finished the bulk of the writing for Meritorium
in about four months, so I feel confident that I could write the next book
much quicker, because I learned a lot from my editorial team and others at whitefox.
Who is whitefox, and what was it like
working with them?
Whitefox is an author services company that I
worked with throughout the writing process. They helped with everything from
editing to design to initial marketing. They did a fantastic job of connecting
me with professional editors, a professional
cover designer, and offered outstanding advice along the way. I would highly
recommend that all self-published authors check them out!
What are you doing to market your book
now?
Right now I am concentrating on getting
my book in front of as many of the awesome book bloggers and book reviewers out
there as possible. Meritropolis is
fortunate to have received
a large number of 5-star reviews on both Amazon and GoodReads, and I am definitely hoping
this trend will continue with Meritorium. I also recently started
working with Emlyn Chand over at Novel Publicity, and she has been great, so I am excited to see what she can
do!
Do you have any advice for authors who are considering the self-publishing route?
I am not one of those authors who will
say that self-publishing is the best choice for every single author, but I am
absolutely glad that I went this route. I love that I can fully control and
fully own my work, but I would encourage anyone who self-publishes to try and adhere to the following advice:
Don’t be a cheapskate - be willing to
pay for a professional editor, a professional book cover designer, etc. It
boggles my mind that people will spend hours upon hours writing their book and
then just take a few minutes to throw some clip art and stock photos together
to “design” their book cover. Don’t. Just, don’t.
Work with professionals - by this I
simply mean to not overly rely on friends, family members, and
co-workers, all of whom
will likely just tell you what you want to hear. You need someone who is not
afraid to point out the problem areas in your book and provide an honest
critique. You already know that your mom
is going to say she loves your
vampire-Scottish-Highlander-billionaire-love-triangle-in-space book that you
wrote, so don’t even bother asking her for
feedback. Instead, pay someone who does
that kind of thing for a living...
Sell, sell, sell - If you are a
self-published author and you are not actively involved in sales and marketing
for your book—which is essentially your mini-business—or you are not paying someone else to be actively
involved in the sales and marketing of your book, then you are not maximizing
the reach your book can have. As uncouth as it might be to say this, writing is
only half of what is required to see success as a self-published author. Yes,
you need to write a good book, but you also need to effectively market and sell
your book (either by hiring someone, or doing it yourself, or both).
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